This is an amazing storyline (very cute) for a short film. The editing in the beginning with the bananas in Levi's hand was terrific. Nice positioning! The audio was a little muffled. Did you place some echo with the voice.? I get the sound of wanting it to be in their heads but at times, it was hard to hear. The scene where the coffee girl comes in and it shows the days going by: a suggestion: move her drastically--like you did after awhile. At first, it looked like a mistake. She was talking to the camera and laughing (I would have omitted that shot)--very first one with the muffin. You have created a very interesting shot. I love the ending and the expressions on Levi's face. Your team seems to work well together and you have come up with some great solutions for the video projects. I am always very blown away! Keep up the excellent work. You will need to start thinking about what films you may want to select for the Alternative Arts Fest!
This is an amazing storyline (very cute) for a short film. The editing in the beginning with the bananas in Levi's hand was terrific. Nice positioning! The audio was a little muffled. Did you place some echo with the voice.? I get the sound of wanting it to be in their heads but at times, it was hard to hear. The scene where the coffee girl comes in and it shows the days going by: a suggestion: move her drastically--like you did after awhile. At first, it looked like a mistake. She was talking to the camera and laughing (I would have omitted that shot)--very first one with the muffin. You have created a very interesting shot. I love the ending and the expressions on Levi's face. Your team seems to work well together and you have come up with some great solutions for the video projects. I am always very blown away! Keep up the excellent work. You will need to start thinking about what films you may want to select for the Alternative Arts Fest!
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